I was a Year 6 student at Hay Park School in Auckland, NZ. I was in McCahon Class and my teacher was Mrs Kingston. This was where I shared my learning.
Our class had a blog and you can visit it by clicking here.
Hi Denzal, I like the way that you used animation and I like the way of how you put in your backrounds also your music because the hole thing matches,well done and keep up the good work
Hey Denzal, I like the way how you used a lot of different colours in your presentation for your goals. You must of put in a lot of work into your presentation. Do you thing you will active those goals?
Hey Denzal, I really like the way you used a clear voice and I love your back round to. Your next step on your personal goal is to put in more ideas so it can make the reader interested. You did well and keep up the good work.
Hey Denzal when did you first started to play rugby and I liked the way that your backgrounds matched your writing did you know my dad plays rugby to if you want you could train with him at the park from Rachael
Hi Denzal, I like the way that you used animation and I like the way of how you put in your backrounds also your music because the hole thing matches,well done and keep up the good work
ReplyDeleteHey Denzal,
ReplyDeleteI like the way how you used a lot of different colours in your presentation for your goals. You must of put in a lot of work into your presentation. Do you thing you will active those goals?
Hey Denzal, I really like the way you used a clear voice
ReplyDeleteand I love your back round to. Your next step on your personal goal is to put in more
ideas so it can make the reader interested.
You did well and keep up the good work.
Hi Denzal
ReplyDeleteI really like your backgrounds and your animation keep up the good work
Hey Denzal
ReplyDeletewhen did you first started to play rugby and I liked the way that your backgrounds matched your writing did you know my dad plays rugby to if you want you could train with him at the park
from Rachael