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Thursday, 12 June 2014

My 100 Word challenge

There were three boys .There  name was Lolo, Denzal and James .They lived in a Island that was made out of chocolate they found the biggest chocolate in the world and they tried to build it because it was cracked.They tried too make it but they couldn't they tried a different strategy but that didn't work.They finally found a strategy that worked they made it but they didn't know that if you made it.It would explode. They made it the next minute they all died a the egg killed everyone in the hole inter world.Know one found out that those three men did it.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Denzal,
    I liked the way that you said, "Who where the three boys great job."
    Did it take time for you to write it or not?
    Fantastic work on your 100 word challenge.

    From Rita

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